hi friends,
how's everything? hope fine.
have you ever heard of
A TALE OF TWO CITIES?
which of these cities
keeps your entities
feli city or
adver city for
they are two extremes
there for who exteems
you find true partners
in feli city
but countless rivals
in adver city
and you are warned to
mind your busines there
while in feli city
you show your care
your concerned friends are
there to advise you
in adver city
they criticise you
like they are jealous
in feli city
they are solicitous
showing concern as
they ask about you
in adver city
it's prying they do
so they can taunt you
for they don't want you
they demand respect
what did you expect
in feli city
you long for true love
you seek trust not doubt
and cooperation
not competition
from your partner
eric winter
3 comments:
Felicity...for me..NYTIME!
Love your thoughts, I tend to visualize everything, and the one picture that comes to my mind is
Ripples on the surface of a lake.
Calm but moving, Still yet unsettled.
Always spreading out.
Cheerio!
It's so nice for me to have found this blog of yours, it's so interesting. I sure hope and wish that you take courage enough to pay me a visit in my PALAVROSSAVRVS REX!, and plus get some surprise. My blog is also so cool!
Feel free off course to comment as you wish and remember: don't take it wrong, don't think that this visitation I make was a matter of more audiences for my own blogg. No. It's a matter of making universal, realy universal, all this question of bloggs.
I think it's to UNITE MANKIND! Don't see language as an obstacle. That's not the point. Open your heart and come along!!!!!
thanks 4 d nice things you say about my poem and my blog. i'll try to visit yours too. you can see my pictures @ www.winteric.tk
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